The author says:

Riven Calyx details the rise of a knight haunted by the children he was forced to kill. He is commissioned by the equally haunted king to find a wizard to remove a curse affecting them both and the area just conquered. It should appeal to young adults and all fantasy fans.

Nathan says:

While there’s nothing technically wrong with anything on this cover… it’s not terribly dynamic or exciting, is it? For a book with “haunted” and “forced to kill” and “curse” and “conquered” in the description, the cover just seems like two people on a springtime picnic, enjoying the ruins.

A more dynamic scene is definitely the best course, but even playing with the color scheme of your current artwork boosts it:

(This is only an “open Photoshop and grab a filter for an example” version. It is not the best possible example.)

The other advice I have, if you’re still planning on using the current artwork, is to decrease the dead space. Remember, 99% of readers will first encounter your cover as a thumbnail; thus, make the important elements — including the type — understandable at that size.

If you move the byline up, you can crop even more and still lose nothing important.

Other comments?

The author says:

Set on a fantasy medieval island. The genre is Monster Romance (Monster Smut) The target audience is women 25-55. This book will be published exclusively on KindleUnlimited.

Leeja the half-orc has bedded dozens of males, but not one has initiated the mating response in her. Without compatible mates, She will never foarm a horde. She’ll never be truly happy. When her friends bet her to try dating “like a human”, Leeja meets a smooth talking, fun loving human who seems like the answer to her problems. He even has her “dantû” stirrung. But when she learns about his playboy past, Leeja must decide if she’ll protect her heart, or bet on love.

Nathan says:

Observing from outside the target audience, I’d have to say that the “monster smut” audience isn’t too discriminating.  But even if these comments make no difference, they have to be said.

The artwork isn’t at a professional level.  You can see that best in the hapless human, who’s got disturbingly warped anatomy. Also, shadows don’t work like that.

All of the print is hard to read, between heavy outlining and a lack of value contrast with the background.

But the biggest problem (and may God have mercy on my soul for saying this): IT’S NOT SMUTTY ENOUGH. A reader who peers through the general murkiness of the cover may come away with an impression of romance, but if this is supposed to appeal to the readers of Taken by the Troglodyte and Bred to the Parasaurolophus*, it apparently needs in-your-face eroticism more than it needs technical skill.

Other comments?

*Please tell those titles don’t exist.

The author says:

Title: She’s cosy and welcoming. She’s entertaining. She’s a floating bomb.

Subjects: Safety in the cruise industry. Big risks taken by the management encouraged by the cheap money from the financial system. An industry forced to cope with the fossil fuels depletion.

Setting: No precise setting, but a big chunk of the book is dedicated to the sinking of the Costa Concordia which happened in Italy. Style: journalistic approach by a non expert who spent several months collecting information and browsing all the resources. It includes a lot of commentary on the view of the facts presented by the current media overall.

Book presentation on the online publishing platforms: A critical view of the cruise industry. An analysis that takes into account the economical, political and technical side of the problem and shows the inherent dangers carried by the business driven choices that affect the design of the new ships. Compounded by a critical view of the image that we get from a subservient media. Through a review of the way the events of the past were reported and how the stories are still told today this work underscores the weaknesses and the faults that were not meant to be seen by the public, it shows how confusion and misleading reports managed to hide all those flaws and weaknesses in plain sight. It also underscores the lessons that have never been learnt because the business cannot afford to learn while they chase the myth of eternal growth. The result of the frantic search for endless growth can be seen in the huge debts that weigh heavily on the accounting of all the major lines. Debts that dictate the pace of their operations, leaving little time for maintenance. Debts that determine the technical choices behind the design of the new ships. Debts driven policies that leave many open questions about the impact they have on the safety of the passengers.

Nathan says:

Any critique here would have to be divided into two parts: Technical and conceptual.

The technical flaws are what present first:

• You literally have a typo in the first word of your title.
• The title is long and ungainly (three distinct sentences??); it seems more like a subtitle without a title to attach itself to.
• The title is borderline unreadable with deep blue type against a black background, and the fireworks behind it take it from “borderline” to “solidly.”

But the conceptual flaws, which present only when one reads the description as well, are even bigger and more important.

Without reading the description, the average reader would have the impression that this was a (poorly presented) suspense thriller set on a cruise ship.  The idea that this is a nonfiction critique of the industry would entirely escape the reader.

Look at the covers of other nonfiction surveys and exposés. They go out of their way to clearly inform the reader — in words rendered in clear, sober type — that this book specifically deals with a particular subject matter.

Go and do thou likewise.

The author says:

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The Hero’s Journey: Opening the Heart with the Element of Fire

The Hero’s Journey follows the element of fire, guiding you to open your heart to love and compassion. This path aligns with Jungian psychology, focusing on discovering and developing the anima—the feminine qualities within the psyche. As you traverse the Hero’s Journey, you’ll ignite the flames of courage and empathy, unlocking your potential to connect deeply with yourself and others.

The Heroine’s Journey: Focusing the Mind with the element of Water

In contrast, the Heroine’s Journey follows the element of water, narrowing the focus of the mind and enhancing the executive function of the brain. This path is where the concept of the Virgin Birth to the Divine Male Child emerges, symbolizing the discovery and development of the animus—the masculine qualities within the psyche. By navigating the waters of the Heroine’s Journey, you’ll cultivate clarity, purpose, and the strength to manifest your deepest aspirations.

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Nathan says:

Evenly split covers are a challenge, and you’ve conquered the biggest hurdle by having the two sides roughly equal in value. However, the other big challenge here is lack of contrast between the type and the background. Especially in the subtitle (or, rather, supertitle), the lack of contrast interferes with readability. The secondary typeface chosen also seems a little too clean and modern to me.

My advice: Increase the contrast, increase the title size so it can be more clearly read in thumbnail, and play with that second typeface.

Any other comments?