The author says:

about starting small business and make a differrnce in your life and earn independently.

Nathan says:

The description’s a little fragmentary; is this about starting a small business AND about making a difference in your life? Or making a difference in your life BY starting a small business?

If it’s the latter (which I suspect is true), then having something business-flavored on the cover would help a lot of potential readers discover it. Even just the outlines of one of those “folded spreadsheet on gatefold paper” cliparts in background would communicate a lot more.

Also: Is these stories inspired by everyday people, or stories OF everyday people? “Inspired by” can mean that a story sort of like what you’ve written actually happened, but that you weren’t bound by the truth.  (See all those TV-movies “inspired by” real events, which means that the writer saw a news item and said, “Yeah, but what if THIS happened?”)

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[original submission and comments here]

Nathan says:

I definitely think we’re getting closer — we’re now entering the zone of personal preference, where several of us might agree that it needs something, but disagree on what that something is.

My suggestions would be:

• Add color into the flag, about half as strong as in RK’s revision.
• Make the female figure slightly warm-toned — not all the way to sepia, but just so the photo looks slightly “historic” and less like a stock image.

Other thoughts?

The author says:

Hello, everyone. I am writing a dark fantasy book series (?) that sets in Mexico. Mixing a lot of prehispanic and european folklore. I am doing a rebranding (and a heavy edition) of all my books (30+) and I want to unify the look of my covers. These are my main series, the gates to my books. All the other books, while related to these, are standalone stories featuring important characters from this series. What do you think about them. I don’t want the covers to say “hey, this is mexican Lore” that’s why I don’t use any symbology related to prehispanic Mexico, but I want to give the idea of “hey, this is like a light novel”. Do you think it works? There’s room to improve? Thank you in Advance.

Nathan says:

I’m always a little leery of commenting on covers for a foreign-language audience, as I might miss some of the visual cues that are common to another culture.

My only comment here is that using anime-influenced art might limit your audience. I know that I personally avoid books with anime covers, as I assume they’re aimed at people devoted to — or at least more familiar with — the storytelling tropes of that genre.

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The author says:

The Seed of Joy is a historical novel set in South Korea in 1979 and 1980. It spans the time from the assassination of president Park Chung Hee to the end of the May 18 Democratization Movement, commonly known as the Gwangju Uprising. During this time, Korea endured the most turbulent months it had seen since the Korean War.

Paul Harkin, a US Peace Corps Volunteer from Indiana, comes to Korea on his first trip away from home. The Peace Corps gives him more than he ever bargained for − from a comically inept public health official, to violent political strife in the cities, to a hard winter in a leper colony. But when he falls in love with Han Mi Jin, a troubled, politically active schoolteacher, he defies the Peace Corps, the United States government, and the Korean martial law authorities to take up her cause. Caught up in the bloodshed of the Gwangju Uprising of May, 1980, he wrestles with love and loss, freedom and responsibility.

The author himself was a Peace Corps volunteer in Korea at the time of the story. This book should appeal to readers of “Human Acts” by Han Kang , “The Island of Sea Women” by Lisa See, and “The Living Reed” by Pearl S. Buck.

Nathan says:

I can see you’re going for a low-key vibe here, and I respect that.  That said, if the violence mentioned in your description plays a significant part in the book, then I would suggest a slightly more energetic look.

One possible suggestion is to add a bit of color back into the Korean flag in the photo — it would give those readers who encounter the thumbnail first (as most readers will) an initial impression of the subject matter that otherwise they wouldn’t get until and unless they clicked through for the larger version.

Also, use a different typeface than Times New Roman for that pullquote — it’s just too generic.

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