The author says:

Life in the Wreckage of the Sexual Revolution — It is 1983 and Troy Stevenson, former college football legend and corporate executive, has it all — a rewarding career in moss-draped Verona, Georgia, a comfortable suburban home, an adoring wife, and two beautiful kids. For this coal miner’s grandson who grew up in a mobile home, life looks abundant and serene as far into the future as the eye can see. But when an employee who is romantically obsessed with him is stung by his rejection, she files a sexual harassment complaint. His world begins to crumble as word of the incident spreads like wildfire through the small Southern town. His reputation is tattered, his position in the community tarnished, and his family mistreated. Does the future now hold social and career ruin and the inability to provide for his family? Or can he prove his innocence, right the wrongs and restore his good name?

Nathan says:

The problem here is that there’s no drama. None. You’ve got four unrelated stock models who look like they’re taking headshots for their profiles on the company website — only the one of the far right looks even a little apprehensive.  Your color scheme is muted and passive. It just doesn’t look interesting.

Use shadows. Use high contrast colors. Use images that can mean rejection or betrayal — crushed flowers, turned backs, whatever. Give the person who sees this  cover a reason to want to find out about the book.

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The author says:

What would you give up to save the one you loved? Director Kolteo Ais spends too much time at the office. Ever since the Galactic Emperor disappeared, he’s been the top man in the ruling Committee for Public Safety, and his fellow Directors would welcome any sign of weakness. Now he has a problem: his brother-in-law has returned from self-imposed exile, and he brings with him a secret that could destroy Kolteo, tear apart the fragile order of the Empire, and set the galaxy on fire. Can Kolteo save the Empire? Can he even save his marriage?

— Genre: Science Fiction, Galactic Empire. Audience: Fans of Star Wars, Firefly

Nathan says:

Without the spaceship composited in there poorly, it’s a very generic and lifeless cover; it has no real focus, either in image elements or even in color scheme.  You’d be better off with a nonspecific/premade cover which solidly proclaims genre and drama than this. Sorry, but true.

The designer says:

I’m new to selling premades, so I’ve been challenging myself to create one in each major genre to get familiar with current trends. This was my “urban fantasy” attempt. The basic concept is that she’s somehow related to the mythical Phoenix, so her current rebirth is into a modern day city. I browsed bestsellers and high rated urban fantasy books for ideas on color/layout/common tropes when designing it, but it still feels off to me.

Nathan says:

1. If it were me, I’d crop the art to about here:

You don’t lose out on any necessary detail, and there’s more of a focus on the central figure.

2. At first glance, I said, “I’d probably add some swirly-glowing magic.” Then I looked again and say that there is swirly-glowing magic, I just couldn’t see it.  Which tells me that you need to do something different with the swirly-glowies — either a different color tint, or more color to show up against the background, or color in the background a bit.

3. Her face seems… vapid. I’d expect this to be a urban-fantasy take on Clueless or Valley Girl.

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The author says:

This is my other idea (with improvements from the comments).

Book description: YA fantasy: An exiled princess must unite six elemental clans to overcome the ancient society that destroyed her family. Her clan’s abilities are nature-based, including shape-shifting. This book deals mostly with her relationship with three other girls, and is about her gaining the courage to fight back.

[original submission and comments here]

Nathan says:

I think the biggest problem here is that it still lacks magic.  From the thumbnail, both the bird and the scrollwork behind the byline (both of which are only marginally magical in themselves) are invisible; what you have left is a possibly historical woman.  Is it a historical romance? A historical drama?  You’re missing the signifiers that tell the fantasy-reading audience, “This book is for YOU.”

In the comments to the original submission, Shelley made an example cover which nails those signifiers squarely. There is NO WAY that anyone could mistake which genre that is, which is just about the first thing that a cover needs to convey.

(Looking closer: Something’s weird about the woman’s jaw. She looks like she’s entering a watermelon-seed-spitting contest.)

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The author says:

Fantasy meets Science Fiction in this action packed Superhero novel. His life would forever change in ‘The Powers Cataclysmic.’

Over twenty thousand years into the future, humankind, Earth, and the entire universe witnessed a catastrophic event that forced most existence across all universes to evolve into the highest dimensions and beyond. After this shift, all sapient beings could fly and have cataclysmic, super cosmic powers, godlike existence, and use even their hair, garments, and energy as extensions of their bodies. Unfortunately, there were those who lusted to dominate over all others as beyond omnipotence was not enough for them.

Over thirty thousand years after that event, Thrastara Navarras turned twenty-two years old. Months passed, and he still had yet to taste the beginning of his adult level powers, and hopes his friends and his mentor Arveias can help him to unleash his powers despite his trust issues and history of personal trauma. He also hoped Kalavria would notice him and that she would at least tolerate his existence. His fate would forever change when a stranger named Arrak killed two of his friends. While thirsting for revenge he is confronted by Exorcists, including Dr. Johnas Moorekase and Dr. Sephras Kainesen. Johnas warns Thrastara he is infested by demons may be a candidate to be Lord Neraios’s next vessel as the Antichristos. The Lord of Brilliance and Darkness could use someone like Thrastara or one of his long lost siblings to gain even more powers. Family secrets will be revealed along the way. Will Thrastara be able to set aside his deep hatred for the maligned Exorcists, or will he succumb to his hunter Arrak, or ultimately his own inner demons? Within the infinite sized dimensions and beyond, from Earth to Mars and beyond, many questions will be answered in ‘The Powers Cataclysmic,’ which is the first book in the Katastrophica series, a series unafraid to mock itself.

Content: Contains the concept of higher dimensions in a more fantasy oriented sense, extraterrestrials, angels, demons, the supernatural, superheroes, content people may find objectionable, religious references and concepts, over the top superpowers, language, references to and instances of smoking, drugs, alcohol, and some sexual contact.

Genre: Fantasy Sub genres: Superhero Fantasy Fiction (Prose), Science Fantasy, Science Fiction, Speculative Fiction

Target Demographic: General Fantasy/Adult (same group that reads series like ‘The Wheel of Time’ and ‘The Chronicles of Amber.’) and Superhero Fiction of all kinds (comics, novels, etc), fans of action anime. Secondary: New Adult, YA I’m aware that science fiction deals with the future, not fantasy. However, superhero fiction is somewhere in the middle, like science fantasy, which is what I’d like to convey.

[original submission and comments here]

Nathan says:

AAAGH! Too much!

Seriously. Angled fonts, beveled fonts, drop-shadowed fonts… The artwork is ornate enough. Adding bling to the type just makes it harder to read.

And with all the added sound and fury in the art, the thumbnail just becomes “I think maybe there’s a figure in there…”  Remember, since 95% of your potential readership will first encounter the book as a thumbnail at Amazon or some other ebook site, your thumbnail has to set the first hook and get them to click through.

I would chop the artwork like so:

…and then use strong font treatments that clearly separate the text from the background and make it easily readable.

(Also: Your blurb is still TL;DR.)

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