The author says:
I’m working to brand this series and would like feedback on these design choices before I extend the banner concept to the rest of the series. Friendships serve as a cornerstone to a rich life. Each of these twenty-four accomplished authors shares authentic stories that consider the meaning of life affirming, sometimes life saving or gut wrenching, and fun realities of investing in each other: Think chicken soup with adult beverages.
Nathan says:
By “banner concept,” you mean the diagonal stripe of handwriting? I have no problem with that. I can offer some other tweaks, though.
- Both the blurb from Midwest Book Review and the medallion from The International Review of Books are extraneous. Readers only care about accolades from sources they’ve heard of, and I think (and hope) that readers are getting tired of awards proudly displayed that don’t really mean anything to them. Save both of those for the back cover or Amazon description. (Yes, that means your top half is empty. I’ll trust you to come up with something for that.)
- My inclination is to have the title in a less formal script font. I think of friendship as something casual and intimate and sometimes messy; a more casual handwritten font would work better for that than something you’d see on a wedding announcement. (Not as casual as the background handwriting, though, as that’s hard to read.) Of course, my best friends aren’t representative samples of the population, so I’ll let the commenters hash this one out.
Other comments?