The author says:
In the crumbling dome city of Grid 46, breathable air is a luxury rationed by Praxis Corp, a ruthless megacorporation that views survival as a commodity. Technician Lyra Sato struggles to keep her sick brother alive while uncovering a buried secret—the enigmatic Seed System, a sentient, evolving AI embedded within the dome’s infrastructure. As the dome teeters on the brink of collapse and tensions flare between oppressed civilians and Praxis enforcers, Lyra must navigate impossible choices. With the Seed System reaching out to her for guidance, she faces a harrowing question: can she reshape the dome’s future, or will her decisions doom what’s left of humanity?
Nathan says:
I think you’ve got a bunch of great elements. Let’s tweak them.
1. The type’s too small. Be loud and proud.
2. Everything is center-aligned but the title. Either center-align that too…
…or right-align the byline to balance it out:
There are other tweaks you could then try — should the letter spacing be tightened so that the title can be even bigger? how is the line spacing? — but I think that will put you in a good place for finishing touches.
Other comments?