{"id":95,"date":"2014-03-18T13:22:00","date_gmt":"2014-03-18T19:22:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/covercritics.com\/?p=95"},"modified":"2014-03-24T10:14:23","modified_gmt":"2014-03-24T16:14:23","slug":"old-things","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/?p=95","title":{"rendered":"Old Things"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The author says:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>This is novel of the thriller\/horror genre and centers around the life of a small town electrician who is in the process of breaking out and starting his own company. A early morning emergency call to his first customer starts him on a journey into the darkest corners of what we perceive as reality. He is to encounter impossible and horrifying things. Old things.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-96\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image.jpg\" width=\"360\" height=\"509\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image.jpg 360w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image-106x150.jpg 106w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 360px) 100vw, 360px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-thumbnail wp-image-96\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image-106x150.jpg\" width=\"106\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image-106x150.jpg 106w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/image.jpg 360w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 106px) 100vw, 106px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>Nathan says:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>1) THAT FONT MUST GO. A low-key photograph such as this one isn&#8217;t necessarily a problem, but it does shift more of the burden of communication onto the font, and this font simply isn&#8217;t up to it.\u00a0 It is a distinctly non-scary font.\u00a0 The replacement font doesn&#8217;t have to be out-and-out scary, because often those overboard fonts end up looking like a joke (for example, all of the &#8220;blood-dripping&#8221; fonts).\u00a0 But something slightly distressed will do just fine.<\/p>\n<p>2) I&#8217;d say to curtail the color palette of the photo a bit; you don&#8217;t need a full range of pastels to show on a thriller\/horror cover.\u00a0 If you overlay everything with a grunge texture, it can do double-duty of making the color more uniform, and adding that &#8220;gritty&#8221; connotation that works so well for this genre.<\/p>\n<p>And since I had a few minutes to spare and it was easy to work on, I did this to illustrate what I&#8217;m talking about:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/oldthings.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-98\" alt=\"oldthings\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/oldthings.jpg\" width=\"360\" height=\"509\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/oldthings.jpg 360w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/oldthings-106x150.jpg 106w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 360px) 100vw, 360px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>This is the five-minute version, and it shows; neither the font nor the texture is what I&#8217;d call my final choice. But it shows you what I&#8217;m talking about.<\/p>\n<p>Any other comments?<\/p>\n<p><strong>March 23, 2014 Edit:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>The author has made some revisions:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-154\" alt=\"OldThingsCover v1.3\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3.jpg\" width=\"450\" height=\"636\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3.jpg 450w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3-106x150.jpg 106w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 450px) 100vw, 450px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-thumbnail wp-image-154\" alt=\"OldThingsCover v1.3\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3-106x150.jpg\" width=\"106\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3-106x150.jpg 106w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.3.jpg 450w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 106px) 100vw, 106px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I like the addition of the birds in the sky; it&#8217;s an extra detail rewarding those who look at the full-sized cover.<\/p>\n<p>I like the font for the title, but I&#8217;d still like to see it both bigger and brighter.\u00a0 The same for the byline; I don&#8217;t necessarily think the author&#8217;s name needs to be read from the thumbnail, but it really disappears here.<\/p>\n<p><strong>March 24, 2014 Edit:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Another revision:<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-156\" alt=\"OldThingsCover v1.4\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4.jpg\" width=\"450\" height=\"636\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4.jpg 450w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4-106x150.jpg 106w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 450px) 100vw, 450px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-thumbnail wp-image-156\" alt=\"OldThingsCover v1.4\" src=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4-106x150.jpg\" width=\"106\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4-106x150.jpg 106w, https:\/\/covercritics.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/03\/OldThingsCover-v1.4.jpg 450w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 106px) 100vw, 106px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I would move the title down so that it&#8217;s centered in the darkness of the trees. And I still think the text would be served by a lighter\/brighter color (not as much as in my five-minute rework, but some).<\/p>\n<p>Other thoughts?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The author says: This is novel of the thriller\/horror genre and centers around the life of a small town electrician who is in the process of breaking out and starting his own company. 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